This book has unedited feel which makes me want to attack it with a red pen for a few hours and send it back to the writer. Not Zoe Sugg, the real writer. Yes the admission by Zoella that her book was ghost-written takes away any excuse it may have had for its poor storytelling and complete disregard for basic grammar and syntax. If you are looking for Zoella'sĀ usual quality, go back to her blog. If you are looking for a well-written teen girl novel, close this tab as fast as possible.